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Saturday, 31 August 2013

poem southern wind

 
Photo taken from Muclicks
I asked the southern wind.
where is my peace of mind? 
How is my king of heart?
Sleeping or waking
and waiting for rejoin again.

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6 comments:

  1. Unknown31 August 2013 at 20:27

    A in vein effort to catch the stars and stop the wind.Read if you like and criticize.

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  2. Pablo31 August 2013 at 23:55

    then southern wind says your king of heart?
    he is strangling your a absent

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  3. Unknown1 September 2013 at 05:31

    I am unable to understand your comment.Thank you so much for reading the poem.

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  4. Unknown1 September 2013 at 19:12

    wow bhut hee achhe poem likhi he aapne, keesko yad karke likhee he ye ....bhut hee achha likha he nw only reading nt waking or sleeping .

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  5. Unknown6 September 2013 at 23:32

    fantastic your writing is getting better

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  6. Unknown7 September 2013 at 20:33

    Thanx

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